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I trusted you before, put my heart in your hands.
Had so much to look forward to, my naive and grand plans.
Then came my doubts, signs you weren't ready..
I felt such a fool and my heart grew unsteady.
Was I wrong to love you on a different level?
My naive trust was snatched by the hands of the devil.

I can't be so selfless -
I can't let you hurt me
(I have to let you go..)

I knew that you loved me, but is all love made equal?
When would you see, I'm forever your geek? Well,
it seems now you do, though my heart lies here battered,
cowering from demons of doubt, my confidence shattered..
wishing that I could remove my heart's stake,
avoid all those mistakes that I see others make.

I can't be so selfish -
I can't let me hurt you
(I have to let you go..)

I want my trust back, want to give you my all!
I'm so scared of hurting you, so scared that I'll fall.
Sometimes I see, we're going to be fine -
I dont understand why, but I know that you're mine.
The tears from my worries float my heart out to see,
that I care about you, as you care about me.

I can't go on like this -
I can't go on without you
(Dont want to let you go..)

My obsessive worries can seem so real, but thankfully time has the power to heal -
time with you that is, the times that we have,
when worries are groundless, when I wonder at love..
times when my heart relinquishes protection
it walks with yours, and is happy..
when I know my direction.

I feel you here with me -
I feel your arms around me
[I'll never let you go]
©2006-2009 =Kermon
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Author's Comments

I just thought of this while in the shower (I think there's something about the secludedness of bathrooms in general that helps me think more clearly, lol o_0 ). Lot on my mind recently, nice to think things over and get them written down, I don't do that enough probably.

I wanted to make this more like a song and possibly fit it to music to play in the band. It would probably be kinda new metal-ish or experimental owing to me being so seemingly emo and all. I like fairly complex music. Erm.. okay. First deviation in quite a while, hope it doesn't make me look too stupid.

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This is beautiful Ali :nod: & yes it'd make a great song too. Well written & have faith in yourself :hug:

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Helen :wave:
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Your welcome :D

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Helen :wave:
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:heart: Give freely & you will reap the rewards :heart:
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that's beautiful. nicely done :D

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i see the fire burning in your eyes
it melts away the ice in my heart
lift away, cloud of darkness
set me into a realm of your warmth
hide me in the folds of your clothes
and keep me safe until this all blows over.

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August 13, 2006
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